Instead of Grey

29 stars and a bottle of lies

Floating around in your golden eyes

Don't say I'm worth it

And fall deeper into that pit

Cause I know it ain't true

It's like saying the night sky's blue

And you may think you're right

But I'm not gonna start that fight

Cause believin isn't everything

It's what makes people sing

But the truth makes people break

And fall into bottomless lakes

For a moment you made me feel like I flew

Made me forget everything true

But I'll never forget what it felt like when I fell

I thought it was a descent into hell

So don't feel hurt when I pull away

I'm just keeping it black and white instead of grey

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

Sounds like a compulsive liar pulling into reality. When everything is hazy grey and you can't distinguish anything, how do you know what to do with yourself? great piece, doll. I like it.

[Tai Ryens]

Reminds me of a conversation between life and death; I assume you've seen it before. Well done.

[Rhea752]

lolzies imagine life and death dating :P

[Tai Ryens]

" You're dead to me. "

[Rhea752]

thanks a lot :(

[Tai Ryens]

I was referring to a conversation between death and life.

[Rhea752]

oh.... lolzies

[CHRIS ANDES]

yeah this is great
it delves to what i'm feeling right now

everything true- everything's true
on the 14th line
=]

[MOON]

Lovely poignant write. Love the opening lines especially.