Night

Night is coming on fast
Night will save you at last
You will feel the Darkness'
Comfortable caress
Your eyes will be the light
In this unforgiving night
Night a child of chaos
Night a sanction for the lost
Children from the shadows
Run away from sorrow
Night a blackening mask
Night the question unasked
Watch as they gather for the masquerade
Unmask unmask and watch as they fade

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

night as it is
=]

[C.C. Marx]

Great job I really like this one Rhea

[Amila Jay]

Wow!!!! Brilliant write !! Totally loved it :))

[Felecia]

Child of the night, speaking! *waves* great poem ahahah, enjoyed reading t

[Rhea752]

Thanks!! :D

[Felecia]

welcome!

[Tai Ryens]

I absolutely love the rhyme scheme, as well as the concept. Such a dark meaning as well. Good job.

[Rhea752]

thank you!

[Timeless-Chan]

I really enjoyed this. Like alot. It's easy to read and it made me really picture things in my mind... Night. Beautiful and dark and unforgiving. You really did a good job!
~Dreamer!

[Rhea752]

thx :)