Stitched Lips

Stitched Lips

A Poem by Rhea752

I am just sitting here voiceless 
Sitting with blank eyes and sewed lips 
But when will you 
When will you see this 
When will you 
When will you help me 
Cause I want to cry 
I want to laugh 
I want to scream till the words run out 
But I can't do all these things 
Until I am free 
So come and unstitch me 
Unthread me, release me 

I hear that voice 
I hear that sound 
I just don't know that it comes from my mouth 
I want to speak all my dreams 
Rip out the seams 
So come and unstitch me 
Unthread me, release me 

But I couldn't see 
That it's up to me 
To live in a world where my voice could be free 
So I just kept on repeating 
Silently thinking 
To come and unstitch me 
Unthread me, release me

© 2012 Rhea752


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You always seem to portray my feelings, dear Rhea. It's either you know me someone, and I don't know you and you're stalking me >.> Or we're just that close in age and we experience the same feelings and situtations (I'm going to go with the second option XD) I love this poem so much. Again, I connected with it like I always seem to do with your poems. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

haha imma go with the 2nd option too :P i mean i'm pretty sure i'm not creeping on u :P lolzies thx .. read more
Felecia

12 Years Ago

Yeah, I know you aren't, I'm just teasing lol. and no problem!



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I personally loved how you ended this poem and the title of this poem. Good work on this :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


Speechlessly relatable...Wow...Great work...It's Excellent

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

thank you :D
 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

you're welcome
You always seem to portray my feelings, dear Rhea. It's either you know me someone, and I don't know you and you're stalking me >.> Or we're just that close in age and we experience the same feelings and situtations (I'm going to go with the second option XD) I love this poem so much. Again, I connected with it like I always seem to do with your poems. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

haha imma go with the 2nd option too :P i mean i'm pretty sure i'm not creeping on u :P lolzies thx .. read more
Felecia

12 Years Ago

Yeah, I know you aren't, I'm just teasing lol. and no problem!
Lovely concept you've here, I especially love the inspiration (I presume?) that sparked the fire necessary to write this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

thank you :)
Poignant write , to be seenn heard understood .

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Rhea752
Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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I am a 15 year old girl who loves to read, write, act, and draw. I just started writing seriously about 2 years ago. I've been published a few times in small online magazines. I am trying to find out .. more..

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