Ever Be

I'm stuck in this world 

Where I excel at transparency 

But for some strange reason 

You could see me 

Caught in your grasp 

You dress me up like a doll 

And pull my puppet strings 

Ruining anything I could ever be 

You turned down the music 

And turned up the tyranny 

Changing everything about me 

My past and present 

But especially, who I was going to be 

But I'm not stupid, I'm not weak 

I have the strength to overcome 

To fight what you have done  

Though scars riddle me 

I'm better than I ever would be 

Now I excel at 

Music 

Life 

And Creativity 

I'm no longer invisible 

And now everyone can see 

That I'm so much stronger 

Than you'll ever be

Author's Note

This inspired the poem

Reviews

[Heromen Selena]

Great story line. The thought of over coming something is always a good feeling to have. Nice job!

[Felecia]

this poem is great. it connected with me for some reason...but i'm not sure why ahah, but it's a good thing. i like it. very nice

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Before seeing your Author's Note, I thought of the music video! Ha ha
Very nice poem. I like the concept.

[Tabitha t]

Though scars riddle me... Idk if it was just me but that one line seemed to not flow with the others. I seemed to seperate the two halfs. I really like this though. A great meaning and the end tied it all together.

[Erin Thomas]

I really love the last two lines! This poem is fantastic!!! Keep up the great work!!! :D

[MOON]

Inspiring and affirming lovely write.

[Sarah W. French]

This is wonderfully written!

[Aehr]

inspiring...

[Tai Ryens]

I can see the connection between the inspiration and said poetry. Well done indeed.

[CHRIS ANDES]

imaginative
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