Rain

Worries are lost 

Your world is stopped 

By blurred time 

And dripping rhymes  

Your face marked with severe lines 

Are smeared into meaningless signs 

Where seconds seem like hours 

And you hold infinite power 

 

There's nothing to fear 

You're no lit up deer 

And emotions slip away 

Into puddles you keep at bay 

Oh, this world of wonder 

I wish I could ponder 

Stay all my days 

But this place is filled with mights and mays 

And soon it will trickle and leak 

And nothing will be left of a world many seek 

I will just have to wait until the next rain 

And endure in between, no not rainbows, but pain

Reviews

[Owlgirl]

Wow, this is excellent. I love this. Great job, the joy of just soaking up the rain and all it can hold is described so well.

[Amanda]

In the third stanza you used the wrong 'your'. Other than that i absutely love this! Great job once again!

[Rhea752]

Thank you. I am gonna go fix that now :D