Not Good Enough

Not Good Enough

A Poem by Rhea752

Scraps of paper 
Float in the air 
Elongated fingers 
Shredding every piece in sight 
Flinging the words 
Far away from her 
She wants to cry 
But somehow can't 
She wants to scream 
But is too afraid 
She is nothing 
Because nothing she does 
Is ever good enough 
She is not good enough 
She'll never be good enough 
I'll never be good enough 
This poem isn't even good enough

© 2012 Rhea752


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I will not comment on the content as I have already said, everything sad and dark is my type, but I will tell you that I think the only thing missing from this poem is a 'be' at line I'll never good enough
I guess it should read I'll never BE good enough


Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

thank you for pointing that out :)



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Unfortunately I think everyone knows how this feels. It's time to ask yourself who you're not good enough for. And why you want to be good enough to them. You're most likely trying to impress the wrong person.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Your depiction of yourself shines well through your words here. From start to finish, you have kept my attention throughout.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You ARE good enough! Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Rhea752
Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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I am a 15 year old girl who loves to read, write, act, and draw. I just started writing seriously about 2 years ago. I've been published a few times in small online magazines. I am trying to find out .. more..

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