Love?

Love?

A Poem by Rhea752

What is this word 
You all speak of 
I've never truly felt love 
Does it burn in your heart 
Like all the poems say 
Does it give you the drive 
To live life 
Was Dante right 
When he said 
It moves the sun and stars 
I feel so empty 
To have not felt love 
Or maybe that's not 
The problem 
Maybe it's because 
No-one loves me.

© 2012 Rhea752


Author's Note

Rhea752
wistful and bitter equals this.

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This is pretty much what I ask myself everyday. What is love? I see all my friends with their boyfriends and listen to them talk about how in love they are and how happy they are and how perfect this guy is. I've never experience having a crush on a guy, let alone love. I question whether or not I'll ever fall in love or if someone will fall in love with me.
But then I see my friends get their hearts broken by guys and I become scared to fall in love...scared to be in a relationship.
Anyway, very nice pome, love it. Keep it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

Than you very much!!
Felecia

12 Years Ago

You're very welcome ^.^



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I like the poem and the reference to Dante. I believe it's full of emotion. However, I don't think you can really understand love only by being loved. You have to be the one in love, to feel the pain of absence and the thrill of reconnection to understand love...Anyway, I like your style of writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, this is incredible intense and a bit depressive too, but I can understand and sense the pain behind your words. I personally believe that love has no boundaries and can come at any time in any form at any degree. I'm sure you'll find someone who will love you and accept you for who you are someday Rhea. Anyways, this is beautifully written and I like it lot. Kudos to you and good luck!

100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Watcher

12 Years Ago

incredibly*
Rhea752

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much :D
The Watcher

12 Years Ago

You're very welcome! =D
Oooh, I like this poem (; It's kind of depressing but I bet a lot of people can relate to it!
Woud make an awful Valentine's Day card, though xDD

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah Olivia

12 Years Ago

I think it would be very funny, actually.. In a dark way! You're welcome d:
Rhea752

12 Years Ago

i might actually do it. if i remember.
Hannah Olivia

12 Years Ago

The kind of card you mail to yourself with a box of chocolates.
Great poem. I like how you mentioned Dante, really adds originality to the poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

Pshhh. I may like Dante. just a little bit :P
It's like you're speaking from my own mind!! This goes through my mind everyday. Beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

thank you :)
Oh my Jesus, I love this! I can really relate and it describes how I feel most of the time when I'm around my friends. I think this is my favorite of yours!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

thank you so much. that means a lot :D

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Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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