Possessed

Possessed

A Poem by Rhea752

Long slender fingers 
Reaching 
From the darkness 
Discolored 
Dark purple fingers 
Sharp 
Pointed fingernails that 
Scrape 
At my skin 
Screams 
From my mouth 
Vermilion 
Blood stains everywhere 
Scarlet 
Lips that smirk 
Lilac 
Splotches all over 
Dirt 
Smears her skin 
Tears 
Streak her face 
Cold 
Ice blue eyes 
Tangled 
Dirty blond hair 
Almost feel sorry 
Until 
She changes me 
Into 
One of her 
Then
Long slender fingers 
Reaching 
From the darkness

© 2012 Rhea752


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As I read this, I thought of a static that was interupting a tv program or a radio. The way the words cut in and out. I made me imagine how this girl was being possessed and how she tried to resist, but then eventually gave in. It was creepy, eerily, and evil. Love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

Thx :)



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Very Good :) And I've never seen a poem laid out like that :) Well Done

Posted 12 Years Ago


dark and wonderful

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! That's well done! Creepy and haunting and totally amazing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

thank you :D
Good! Why is it that evil is often blonde and blue-eyed?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

12 Years Ago

lol :P
Elege

12 Years Ago

I must agree.

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Rhea752
Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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