Not Yet At Least

My perfect land is supposed to be my mind. Which is currently being ruled by pessimism. I am working to become a little more optimistic.

My perfect land 

Does not exist 

In the realm 

Of stars and seas 

My perfect land 

Does not exist 

In the place 

Of dirt and trees 

My perfect land 

Does not exist 

No, not at all 

Not yet at least

Reviews

[Felecia]

Very nice. I makes me think...I somehow have a perfect land myself. But you're right, it can't exsist. It's impossible. Beside imagining it in our minds. But it cannot live and exsist in the real world. Nothing's perfect, and if we ever do get perfection, we will only wish for something more perfect than it.
Very nice poem. Thank you for sharing.

[Rhea752]

Thank you :)

[Owlgirl]

Wow! I love this! The repition makes it and the images are wonderful :)

[Elege]

Wow I really like this, Smooth is one word. Powerful, but slowly building strength from beginning to end. I read the title, and honestly didn't see the end coming. Great piece. great piece.

[Rhea752]

thank you Elege :D

[F.P. Chat]

I like the poem but most of it I like the meaning...

[Jordan A. Wilson]

smooth and powerful

[Rhea752]

thank you!! :)

[Amanda]

Describes how I feel sometimes. Don't worry girl, I'm working on being less pessimistic too ;P

[Rhea752]

Glad you're back :D

[Melody]

I don't really know how to describe it, but I know it's good. Lol

[Thomas Reilly Thornhill]

Very good, I like it