Not Yet At Least

My perfect land is supposed to be my mind. Which is currently being ruled by pessimism. I am working to become a little more optimistic.

My perfect land 

Does not exist 

In the realm 

Of stars and seas 

My perfect land 

Does not exist 

In the place 

Of dirt and trees 

My perfect land 

Does not exist 

No, not at all 

Not yet at least

Reviews

[Felecia]

Very nice. I makes me think...I somehow have a perfect land myself. But you're right, it can't exsist. It's impossible. Beside imagining it in our minds. But it cannot live and exsist in the real world. Nothing's perfect, and if we ever do get perfection, we will only wish for something more perfect than it.
Very nice poem. Thank you for sharing.

[Rhea752]

Thank you :)

[Rahul]

I don't think it's a poem, it is a great and lovey song to me, i love this song even i'm stilll singing this song,
are you gonna edit here somemore lines ?
let me know if you do, i'd like to read more, beautifully penned.100/100 :)

[Rhea752]

Thanks for the review :)

[Ripple of Aqua]

Perfect. Just plain true and perfect words.

[Rhea752]

Thx :)

[Celestial Witch Child]

You'll find it, doll. We always do. (:

[Coyote Poetry]

Interesting thoughts in this poem. I agree no perfect land exist. Just people doing their best. Nice flow of thoughts open the door to questions. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rhea752]

Thanks :P

[MOON]

Beautiful.

[ewest1220]

Man this is killing me it's got a very similar feel to a poem in my book. However you have cast that same idea of a nonexistent perfection in a whole different light. Great work thank you for sharing this!

[Rhea752]

thank you!!! P.S. i can't get your book for a couple of weeks so be patient

[ewest1220]

lol I totally forgot you were going to buy it actually XP Either way this thing is fantastic! In fact I think it's going to have to go in my favorites.

[Rhea752]

Thank you :)

[Tai Ryens]

The repetition and imagination in this poem were thought very nicely.

[Sarah W. French]

I liked the repetition and the wee bit of hope at the end.

[kristen]

Enjoyed reading your poem, and wouldn't mind hearing more about " My perfect land..."