Hate

for a contest

Dark twisted resentment boiling over.

Reviews

[Archia]

It's like I can feel the despair and anger building up, and I'm left to wonder what happens next, what this person will do when they crack.

[ewest1220]

Interesting. What contest was this for? It feels like it should be a part of a larger piece. The line is really really good makes me want more. Good work!

[Rhea752]

it's called "magic in one line, again" i'm getting desperate to win a contest :P

[ewest1220]

I gotcha. Well this one line does it pretty well I hope you win it!

[Rhea752]

thx :)

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