Love Is Blind

..I know it's kinda' mushy but still, I wrote it for my friend..

Love Is Blind

 

Love is blind

That’s what they say

At first I didn’t

Believe as I may

But sooner than later

I finally found out

That love is blind

Without a doubt.

 

I saw you last night

Probably in a dream

I couldn’t believe it

It was accurate as it seemed

You smiled at me

With a halo of light

Encircling your face

In the darkness of the night

But you disappeared

In a snap of a finger

I guess in wishful trances

I can no more linger.

 

I entered class this morning

As merry as early summer

As I saw you pass by

My eyes filled with wonder

But all those awe in me

Slowly shattered apart

When I saw you hand in hand

With a damsel in your heart.

 

Then I recalled

All the favors for you I carried out

From papers to personal matters

All done naively without a pout

I suppose I was too sightless

To see the whole veracity

That only for convenience

You were using me.

Reviews

[Luna]

That is rather sad, to be used. This is a very deep poem and it capture the emotion perfectly. Good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. Love open the right and wrong doors. But we must learn. I like the description and the story.
Coyote