I need You

I need You

I’m trying to hide it with some other guy but I wanna be with you. You light up the world like I want it to be lit up and the sun never sets with you and that's the way I like it the way I like, yeah And a day without you is driving me insane and I'm just trying to hide it with some other guy.

I don’t why I still like you I just can’t get over you. You broke my heart a billion times but I just wanna be with you. Woah oh, Wanna be with you. I just want to be treated right this time and somehow that’s will be with you. I need you more than I realise

Reviews

[Richard McLin]

Structure is a bit rough, but I love how you illustrated the pain of unrequited love. This is a very good piece, that with some work can become a great piece. Nicely done, look forward to reading more of you work.
-Richard

[rgupta]

Thank you so much for this review, this piece is still a work in progress

[Richard McLin]

Well it's off to a great start.