alone in rain

Solitude in rain

It's raining cats and dogs
There lie some unburnt logs.

Just like my inner soul,
Which is deeply drilled like a hole.

I walk alone in the rain
Hiding all my pain .

I loudly cry out my voice,
Unheard in the rain's noise.

My tears get mingled with rain drop
One and two but never they stop.

So i walk drenched all alone
Only me and my groan.

Reviews

[Aethereal]

I enjoyed how you expressed a melancholy mood in conjunction with rain and logs. I was inspire to write this tiny gift poem for you:

Cool Persuasion

Me, and the rain ...
pouring like cats and dogs
o’er fierce sputtering logs ...
quenching my pain .

[Rishabh Goel]

thanx a lot for your appreciation and the gift poem,both are equally important for me.

[amrit]

props for beautiful lines .. !

[Rishabh Goel]

thanks brother

[Dandelion]

A powerful poem full of pain and sentiment, good job!

[Rishabh Goel]

Thanx a lot Daniel. Your appreciation means a lot.

[Dandelion]

You're welcome

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

At times I think it would be nice to walk in the rain and cry, because no one would really notice but I haven't tried it lol You did good showing pain and sorrow.

Good Job

[Rishabh Goel]

Thanx a lot for your appreciation.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome