My MInd

My mind

running all over the place

left right, up down

every where

not sure what to do

thinking seems to be the thing

yet i know i shouldn't 

what should i do

where should i go

why should i have to handle this

Christmas was suppose to be happy

yet it brought torcher and pain

it brought memories 

i do not agree

New years is suppose to be fun

Then again it remindes me 

i have to live in hell

What do i do 

i am losing my mind

I cant do anything

cant even sleep

 

My mind my mind

what a horrible place

Reviews

[emmajoy]

What an awful hell you've been living, what a dark path you're still walking along. What to say, popsicle? Guess there comes a harder than hard time when you stop, think and then.. look forward along that path.. shedding what's been. You can't do anything about the past, but, someone who can write such magnificent poetry as you do, has the strength to forge on through life.. a precious life. God bless, Rebecca, Like Sharon, am here or hereabouts any time. (You)

[Miss Sharon]

Oh Rebecca....as a mother I am heartbroken to read of your pain. Your writing is very descriptive and holds the reader's attention from the first words. I would like to be a friend and support to you if you would like. Please contact me. ~Sharon

[William Liston]

I found this piece very heart-felt and relatable ... I feel this way all the time with my mind racing everywhere, especially at night when I can't go to sleep. For that reason, the line "cant even sleep" resonated with me. Coincidentally, I wrote a diary entry just last night that was similar to this poem ... writing at night helps me sleep.

Thank you for sharing this piece :)

- William Liston

[Rebecca Garber]

You are so very welcome for writing this poem. i do appreciate what you say. I take it into consideration when i write later on. I always use your feed backs. So thank you