Spin

It is turning 

circling around me

up and down

trapped inside 

with no way out

captured it seems

it is turning

circling around me

up and down

i feel it

faster it goes

harder it is

it is turning

circling around me

up and down

the bones

the bones

My heart just wants to be shown

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

I can truly feel the pain in the poet's words... The whole poem speaks of an unbearable pain that the poet is going through but she seems to find no hope of getting out of that pain... Don't give up my frnd, you have the strength to come out of it, you can... Everything will pass away frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Rebecca Garber]

I have no hope no faith. i don't think that it is going to go away.

[Jade]

love that last stanza, enjoyed the whole write

[Rebecca Garber]

thank you very much.

[WittyWonka]

An almost out of body experience. This is a thought provoking piece.

[Rebecca Garber]

This is the pain i feel because the person who rapped me i was not able to prevent them from doing the same to my younger sister.

[WittyWonka]

We are not responsible for what others do. This is not your burden to bear, though I completely understand why the pain is present.