Despair

Tetracyts written in school, but not for school, of course not!

Where

are you?

Why have you

gone away now?

You left me and aren't coming back here.

Your absence has left me empty but clear.

My mind became

an open

door to

love.

Hate.

Sadness.

Emptiness.

The low lament

of insufferable grief and despair.

I remember your face and I don't care,

the tears roll down

my sunken

cheeks and

fall.

Reviews

[Carlouse]

i like the play with the bold font and the complimentary colors its a bit hard to follow but it sends a solid message

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Tetractys #7 contest!

[Wicahpi]

thank you for a nice entry into my
Tetractys #7 contest. Congrats!

[sincerlyryan]

that was great!i love your peotry

[Ali_Avery~7]

ooo these are cool :} i love the structure and strong messages
-QG