10/22/09 "The Game"

Thrown together in a few minutes from A prompt

I have only a few regrets,

That i had made you happy

that I had done my best

that i hadn't doubted you

like I always doubt the rest.

 

I regret I wasn't there for you

that my mind is out of place

I regret that I wasn't fair to you

that ~love~ isn't the case.

 

Rather that....I fell in Lust with you

companionship with nothing binding two...

I regret that i'm so prudent

and all i might have missed

I don't regret the fun we had

but I do regret the Diss.

 

I regret leading you on

then not permitting a kiss

I do regret my lusting

do you regret our game?

I don't regret the guessing

to me its all the same.

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar please

Reviews

[shane]

i always enjoy the fast written ones, very good =]
Shane

[PhantomDancer]

Strong idea, and you wrote very confrontationally.

[Johnny Monroe]

Wow! This a fierce and straight up love/hate poem. There is a feeling of self loathing that prevails through the length of the poem, but you can sense that who ever is writing is feeling intense emotional feelings for a person that had such a huge impact. Miraculous job!

[BjH]

ignore the grammer?
yes indeed
f**k the grammer
but the poem?
in short i don't enjoy reading but i liked this
emotional honesty is addictive
stronger than crack is the confessional
cheers grammer girl
Benjamin

[BjH]

ignore the grammer?
yes indeed
f**k the grammer
but the poem?
in short i don't enjoy reading but i liked this
emotional honesty is addictive
stronger than crack is the confessional
cheers grammer girl
Benjamin