Bloody Mary and Jack the Ripper

A cute little Idea a friend tossed me to play with

Bloody Mary and Jack the Ripper

sitting in a tree

wond'ring where they ought to be.

He kills hookers and she kills teens

with them together we'll need more M.E.'s

 

Bloody Mary and Jack the Ripper sitting in a tree

K-I-L-L-I-N-G

First comes blood

second comes bone

he makes you feel right at home with grapes and wine,

a house with mirrors

You'd better hope that you don't hear her.

She gets real jealous when he ain't alone

don't need her name to bring her home.

 

Bloody Mary and Jack the Ripper sitting in a tree

K-I-L-L-I-N-G

First comes blood

Second comes bone

with them you'll never die alone.

A tag-team match is quite unfair

look out behind you!

Mary's there.

Reviews

[constancelovesdarkness]

I really liked the poem:) I like it cause it's true about who and how they kill, especially Jack the Ripper..

[Sean M. Addams]

this is very cool , unique and catchy... like the creepy nursery rhyme feel to this ... overall a very enjoyable read... liked this alot ..nice job!!!

[Jinelly]

the general idea of this is good, and i enjoyed reading it:]

[Stephanie]

Oh my god, I love this so much! I remember when I used to go to camp, there was a house in the woods and we all thought it was Bloody Mary's house or something. Then a bunch of girls would go into the bathroom and say her name in the dark while in front of a mirror and it was all ridiculous! This brought back those memories. Besides that, it was funny and cute! I like the "first come blood, second comes bone". That was clever. Awesome write!

[PixieLee]

At first I thought i'd just be polite and review one of your poems in return, but this is FANTASTIC!

'First comes blood
Second comes bone'

SUCH a good idea, and beautifully written :)

[Silvario]

hehe, this was great, i realy enjoyed it. a very clever idea that you captured well. nicely written, very creative. creepy, but in a good way.

well done indeed :)

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

This is cool and creepy..I can see little ghost girls jumping rope to it..all dressed in black ..or it being chanted in the background of a movie.

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Clever dark humor. The nursery rhyme gives it a wonderful effect. I really enjoyed, and was honored to be figuratively murdered by such historically renowned villains.

Cheers!
GM

[Linda Stinson]

The strange and unusual. Murder bye fairy tale. And they are ganging up also, the stalkers. Good work, strange, but good. Keep it up.

[Taylor H]

cute lol