Lost in the ocean

Lost in the ocean

A Poem by reverie_bibliophile

Lost in the vast ocean looking for a small rock to hold on,
All I wanted was to be found while I was getting lost within myself.
The water around me kept rising and i was drowning, not knowing how to swim
Hoping a hand would reach out and pull me up again,
Hoping to feel the land again,
Hoping to feel the sun on my skin, but all I feel is the chilling water trying to pull me deep inside it.

© 2024 reverie_bibliophile


Author's Note

reverie_bibliophile
Be critical!! Would love some constructive criticism ♥️

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Added on June 15, 2024
Last Updated on June 15, 2024
Tags: Hope, lost, comfort, value, reliance, support