Mel Gibson and The Blunt Ash of Orson Welles

Attack Force Z is the best movie ever!!!!

Pain in my stomach,
can you feel the taste?
Of the acids on my breath
a lynched throat that's yanked.

Bullet to my f*****g face,
wish I was erased.
From society and their f*****g
childish games.

Who's to blame for this new order that brings us pain?
They only gain from manipulation to bring them
fame.

I can see the jealousy ridden on
their face.
Narcissistic m***********s always stay the same.

A bunch of f*****g zealots
with diluted brains.
Using friendship as a title just to
slice your veins.

Why you skin me up?
Why you shoot me down?
Why you put a dagger through my earhole while I'm coughing up my blood?

Why you all smile and twist your blades into my belly just for fun?
Even though you truly hate me but you say it's all in love.

You are f*****g insecure
deep inside, your worse than s**t.
That's why I don't trust no one cause they all are
hypocrites.

I just want to be alone,
I've lost my patience with this s**t

　

Reviews

[Kaylee]

This piece is fueled by an anger! That I believe everyone feels more frequently than we'd admit. I loved the verse "Using friendship as a title just to slice your veins." It reflects one of my own personal dilemmas. In the "why you" verses I'd advise possibly changing it to read "Why would you" I feel it'd read easier. Powerful work!

[Giulia King]

This is a very powerful piece! I f*****g love it

[bibin Sebastian]

good one . i enjoyed it . your language is appreciative. powerful words and ideas indeed