Good Luck (Stockholm Syndrome 2014-2016)

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Trauma in my eyes,
Pain in my smile.
I tried to gut my heart out
With my grip on this fork

While I'm drunk off
The whiskey.
No pain
Feeling numb.

Yet I'm dumb,
Since I'm young.
Busy f*****g with
Eternity.

I still question life,
While the answers
Are in front of
Me.

Welcome to a world
Where "true" friends are now
Your enemies.

Using you for bullshit
Laughing, smiling,
Like we're friends
Indeed.

Bullet in my dome,
While their busy
Making fun of me.

Laughing at my pain,
As I vomit from
The energy.

Pain inside my head,
While I'm feeling so
Damn useless.

Just a victim
To your Stockholm
Just to cure your
Insecurities.

Tired of the bullshit.
Doing nothing,
Slowly judging
Me.

Fork twist through
My tissue
And I admit I do have
Issues.

But I'm not a f*****g
Liar,
That ignores
All that transpired.
Just to bring others down,
Just to get what you desire.

Reviews

[Chris]

Good submission. Very emotional writing which delves into the fact that that friends can often be your worst enemies. The simple problem is that you express emotion to your "friends" instead of seeing them as enemies, and that is why you incorporate the idea of Stockholm Syndrome. Good analogy.