Nazi Occupied France 1943, Greenland.
A Poem by
Cahjli Symes
Fail.
A Cold night's air
Laying in despair,
Now tap drips.
© 2015 Cahjli Symes
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Odd. Interesting title, interesting poem; relation though? And why is your comment 'Fail.'?
Posted 8 Years Ago
The write itself is well done; how it relates to Nazi Germany is anybody's guess. If you address a subject in your title you should at least MENTION it in your write. Other than that?..take care...dan
Posted 9 Years Ago
The write itself is well done; how it relates to Nazi Germany is anybody's guess. If you address a subject in your title you should at least MENTION it in your write. Other than that?..take care...dan
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Cahjli Symes Cloud City, FL
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Hi my name is Cahjli and I write poems,screenplays and lyrics. Hope you enjoy :D
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