Nazi Occupied France 1943, Greenland.

Nazi Occupied France 1943, Greenland.

A Poem by Cahjli Symes
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Fail.

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A Cold night's air

Laying in despair,

Now tap drips.

© 2015 Cahjli Symes


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747
Odd. Interesting title, interesting poem; relation though? And why is your comment 'Fail.'?

Posted 8 Years Ago


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dan
The write itself is well done; how it relates to Nazi Germany is anybody's guess. If you address a subject in your title you should at least MENTION it in your write. Other than that?..take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Cahjli Symes
Cahjli Symes

Cloud City, FL



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Hi my name is Cahjli and I write poems,screenplays and lyrics. Hope you enjoy :D more..

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