Monolith

Quietness within the darkness of space
The void opens wider
As the heat from stars sing

An isolated incident
Losing orbit
Fixing wings

The vortex opens wider
Within five dimensional layers

As the astronaut rips apart within a black hole of despair.

No room for air.

Reviews

[Vincent Penn]

I like how you described everything in this. Though I feel there could have been more, maybe it's just short and sweet.