This is great, I cant even process how many variations of scenes are promoting through my mind. This definitely waves higher than any flag on a pole. The truth behind American history cannot be hidden any more. Great write, loved the ending. Paint it black my friend.
Hmm, I was drawn in by the title. I just couldn't look away, so I clicked here. Like others have stated, I really enjoyed the sexual word play here. I wish it was a little longer and more elaborate.
Very powerful...this touched me, Cahjli!
Every stanza is so truthful and leaves a deep impact on the readers.
I liked this poem.
Injustice lies everywhere leaving innocent and kind to endure.
Powerful, honest and strong thoughts.
"Life now sour,
Blood now sweet
The nightmare begun once you bowed to your knees"
The beginning powerful and the ending. perfect. Cahjli for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
The wordplay is f*****g dope on this one, mind my french, but the raw guttural feel of this seems to liken a razors edge. Bloody, sawn in half breath spacing makes for a smooth ride. Nicely penned...
This is great, I cant even process how many variations of scenes are promoting through my mind. This definitely waves higher than any flag on a pole. The truth behind American history cannot be hidden any more. Great write, loved the ending. Paint it black my friend.