Chemical X

Lol this is a way I'm going to ask a girl out...well it went well

Within the thoughts of my mind, I combine
The thoughts of me being with you in time

The long walks on the beach, our toes in the sand
Holding your hand is the only thing I dream

and the things I feel

I emote
I devoted
My feelings onto you
Which are true

Waves crushing above us
The salt scent in our hair
Away from despair
You here in my arms

Why make it a dream
If its to be reality
Together in happiness
As your warm body lays beside me

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Okay you know I had to read it with that description ...this is going to win you a date for sure, and if it doesn't, you don't really want one because obviously she doesn't know what a beautiful heart looks like. This is amazing. Loved it. Good luck ;D

[Cahjli Symes]

well guess who has a girlfriend :D

[Ghost of Jupiter]

YAY... hahaha Good work, you don't waste any time do you? hahaha

[Cahjli Symes]

ehhhhhh lol

[Cahjli Symes]

idk honestly

[Wynter Page]

Ah this is so sweet and beautiful and romantic :) guaranteed to give any girl butterflies

[Matching Socks]

Lovely feel to this one. :)

[Michelle Farren]

This was beautifully written. You put so much passion into your writing! Any girl would be lucky to be asked out this way (:

[Cahjli Symes]

thank you :)

[Gabby Nieves]

This is so beautiful, my eyes started to fog and I realized truly how lonely I am lol. No, seriously you're talented as f**k Cahjli.

[Cahjli Symes]

thank you gabby :) dont feel lonely :/

[Jorge Ron]

wow! this is so good, stranger ive never met before ;D

[Cahjli Symes]

why thank you stranger i've never seen or started a band with

[I Am Svetlana]

How cute and thoughtful! I'm sure everything went well, I know if some guy wrote a poem to ask me out, I would definitely give him a chance! I also used to watch this cartoon show all the time when I was younger :)

[Cahjli Symes]

this was actually my favorite tv show as a kid besides Dragonball z and anything batman or spider-man related lol but yeah she accepted :D

[I Am Svetlana]

Great to hear that she accepted! And Dragon ball Z was the s**t man!

[Cahjli Symes]

Its amazing i have all the episodes on my computer XD

[I Am Svetlana]

My brother used to have all the movies and such. So, my sister and I always used to watch them with him when he was back living at home.