In Dreams

In Dreams

A Poem by revenant21

There's only

One place

In this

World

You can hide

Away from the

Cruelty

Of

The world

Away from

Insults

Cast out by the croud

In Dreams

You control

What others

Can do

When in Dreams

You can just

Flat away

But when you sleep

One that is

Never ending

A never waking Dream.

When your

Fears can

Jump

Right out of

Your head

When in nightmare's

Your life is

What others

Control

Shadows talons

Grasp you tightly

Into a prison

From which

You'll never be free

Free from the

Clutches of

Control

In nightmares

Your fears

Control all

Shadows

Well, now

In Nightmares your Dreams can never come true

 

 

© 2009 revenant21


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When in nightmare's
Your life is
What others
Control
Shadows talons
Grasp you tightly
Into a prison

Now these are some amazing lines here
Wow! I love this write, you have talent.
i really like your style, it's amazing

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this hun! You're such a good writer.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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