Frost

It covers everything

It is dreaded

As winter comes

It courses through

His veins

Just like blood

It follows the

Trails left by

Even the most

Delicate rose

Are engulfed

By Jackie Frost

He pulls winter

Along with him

Everywhere he goes

Frost is left behind

A face

Left at her window

To remind her

Of the kisses they shared

He travels along

Leaving

Behind everything

Leaving them with

Just a lick of Frost

Reviews

[J.Black]

"Frost is left behind

A face

Left at her window

To remind her

Of the kisses they shared

He travels along

Leaving

Behind everything

Leaving them with

Just a lick of Frost"


ahhh very much a good read!

[Jessica M.]

Very nice writing.
I like how the poem develops from the simplicity of weather to the complexity of memory.

[That Weirdo You Just Mi..]

I like this. I like the last line too. Just a lick of frost. That's amazing. Good job hun.

[Ravenskald]

very fine writing
love the lines
romantic, but you can't help wantimg to chase after him
and give him a ****
ah sorry no violence
this is a family programme

thanks for the read

[Phibby Venable]

i love this, especially how he leaves a face to remember his kiss...
very fine writing..(i like the lacy look of frost, though)