Wytches
A Poem by
revenant21
Drawn in the Earth
A pentagram indented.
A cauldron sits
Beneath her
The final ingrediant
Flies into
The bubbling stew
Her sisters fly overhead
Wooden steeds
Tight Between their legs
Storms chase
To Their every command.
No one is safe
From a wytches wrath
The smoke rises
Into the great grey sky
The final words
Fall delicately from
Her soft lips
All enemies
Shall burn.
Hell Hath no fury
Like Wytches scorned
© 2009 revenant21
Author's Note
What do I always say?
Reviews
wicked man! IT reminds me about X-men "Hell have no fury like a woman's scorn." Awesome poem. Witches are cool and you defintely proved it to be so! Great job, as always!
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Cool, very magical, and descriptive, I really really like it, (what else can I say)
Posted 15 Years Ago
Cool, very magical, and descriptive, I really really like it, (what else can I say)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Hell yes! This is my kind of poetry.. loved the flavour of this one. Well scribed all the way.
Your words have set my pagan blood on fire!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Hell yes! This is my kind of poetry.. loved the flavour of this one. Well scribed all the way.
Your words have set my pagan blood on fire!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is a great piece. Wonderful descriptions and I really like the format. Nice work!!!
Heather
Posted 15 Years Ago
This is a great piece. Wonderful descriptions and I really like the format. Nice work!!!
Heather
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
That is really good. How do you come up with all this? Am I a witch? I don't think I am. Do you?
Posted 15 Years Ago
That is really good. How do you come up with all this? Am I a witch? I don't think I am. Do you? <3
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
It reads like a long haiku. Those short, quick phrases. I love magical poetry, stories, movies and anything I can get my hands on. So, this was very pleasing to me. Nice work.
Posted 15 Years Ago
It reads like a long haiku. Those short, quick phrases. I love magical poetry, stories, movies and anything I can get my hands on. So, this was very pleasing to me. Nice work.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on January 19, 2009
Last Updated on January 21, 2009
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