Ramblings today

Just a little more rambling ..

I'm inclined to resign 

   each time I rewind.

But it's once I've defined

  just what keeps me confined, 

I realize that I find

..It was all in my mind

I'm hoping next time

   I align with mankind.

Reviews

[Vivian Fisk]

This is SO clever. It showed me the playful relationship of self with self, one self wanting to just give up, the other one saying, "Now, now...it's not that bad, let's look at this again." And I sort of got to play along, unseen.

And the rhyme is so fine! (tee hee)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. I did like them. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Unspoken poet]

what a fun little write, enjoyed this. Awesome

[apennylate]

*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

Hell yes... This was a superb crash of rhyme mastery... Easily breathed between points of meter... Succinct and slams home the misalignment of soul...

[Matthew Kult]

Creatively Separated

Great Read

Matthew

[Elizabeth]

nice poem - the rhymes are excellent. I especially loved the end-
"I'm hoping that next time
I align with mankind."

[genocide]

does this mean you have trouble connecting with people

[revalatia]

Yes, as a matter of fact it does

[genocide]

i have troblue connecting with people to don't feel bad

[WillaDanvers]

I love the rhyming this piece has, and the simplicity yet delicate intensity it holds. Always great pieces from you!

[revalatia]

thank you very much for reading and reviewing :)

[emipoemi]

A fun read! A marvellous attempt at of writing a one-rhyme poem! Well done!

(I'm debating whether the "that" is necessary in "I realize that I find", given each time I read it, it either doesn't help the musicality or it's fine.....but that's a petty comment, this is overall a great poem.)

[revalatia]

Thank you for reading this.. And yes I see what you mean..
I adjusted it a bit.. .. flows smoother. So thanks for the tip as well... :) Keep on, keeping on.. I'm eager to read more of your stuff as well. Ciao!