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A Poem by revalatia
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Politics and twitter.. Nearly fully sane -it hurt so bad :P ----imagining this as a slowed down heavy metal track.. wait for it...

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Faith in Disguise..-
..while despising your Lies-----
Hypnotized!
Extinguished my Cries . - Our Demise!
----implied through Outcries
..Spying eyes!
....Be advised of our skies------
   Buying Highs-!Downsizing my "Whys?...
Civilized?! ---(Organized ---ostracize.
Harmonized! -aimed at my heart
-merchandised! ....Deceit my prize ........

© 2016 revalatia


Author's Note

revalatia
...If you could hear it the way that I am humming this in my head... It would make more sense.. well.. maybe that's a stretch..but it would definitely sound cooler lol

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Has a lyrical rap feel to the words and had the image of a certain (politician) playing to the camera with earnest, imploring falseness as he tells us how it's gonna be for all but the lucky few. There was a song I think was called, or at least about the revolution not being televised, which popped into my head as I read this, It won't be televised, it will be choreographed to show what they want to show.
Nicely captured....or should I say, flippin' awesome :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Thank you! ---And yes---Precisely what I was aiming at ..after a political rant with just to many links to other deceptions. I figured I would narrow 3 hours into about 15 second . Wish it was that easy to express before my f*cking voice died. Thank you very much!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Scotch mist.

8 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Has a lyrical rap feel to the words and had the image of a certain (politician) playing to the camera with earnest, imploring falseness as he tells us how it's gonna be for all but the lucky few. There was a song I think was called, or at least about the revolution not being televised, which popped into my head as I read this, It won't be televised, it will be choreographed to show what they want to show.
Nicely captured....or should I say, flippin' awesome :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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revalatia
revalatia

Azusa, CA



About
Thoughts in motion..words spiraling inside me.. more to come.................................later....In the meantime.. My own moment of clarity.. was realizing repeating the same mistakes over and ov.. more..

Writing
Beeware.. Beeware..

A Poem by revalatia