Jigsaw, Crosswords, Mindfuk

Jigsaw, Crosswords, Mindfuk

A Poem by revalatia
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Just rambling

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The riddles and games

take a walk through a maze

Can anyone solve these puzzles?

Please f*****g stop these puzzles!


Intense the complexity that boggles my mind with the mystery-

the atrocities!

of those who are blind.

How frusterating! How disheartening!

Can I obtain the patience to furbish solutions- so the questions stop pounding inside?

-Oh how they f**k with my mind.

The games and these riddles must die!

FIN

© 2016 revalatia


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Been there, done that, wanna buy the t shirt? This is one I can certainly relate to, being the kinda guy who causes confusion in abundance, while oblivious of the chaos left in his wake. Sometimes I feel like I am an unknown tsunami, oblivious of the words behind the thought not matching in intention, leaving an ever growing confusion between two minds.
This is confusion personified in words. How one careless thought can avalanche into a whirlwind of confusion.
Beautifully expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is such a cool piece of writing! Glad I found this, keep writing because I really enjoyed it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Been there, done that, wanna buy the t shirt? This is one I can certainly relate to, being the kinda guy who causes confusion in abundance, while oblivious of the chaos left in his wake. Sometimes I feel like I am an unknown tsunami, oblivious of the words behind the thought not matching in intention, leaving an ever growing confusion between two minds.
This is confusion personified in words. How one careless thought can avalanche into a whirlwind of confusion.
Beautifully expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 24, 2016
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revalatia
revalatia

Azusa, CA



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Thoughts in motion..words spiraling inside me.. more to come.................................later....In the meantime.. My own moment of clarity.. was realizing repeating the same mistakes over and ov.. more..

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A Poem by revalatia



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