yup...

It happens

the simple act of writing to ease my troubled mind

 

seems to much for you to manage  with all your busy time.

 

If you do not want me,  thats all you got to say.

 

but if you do, i'm hear for you

 

to make and break my day.

 

If you want me, you can use me

 

but don't abuse me or you'll lose me.

 

Just let me know if i should go

 

to find what i deserve.

 

And should you ever find someone who wants you like i do,

 

i wish her lots of luck and patience~

 

to wait around for you.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

There is only one person created for each one of us
it's not a bus stop this life we live

So yes sometimes we feel unappreciated or abused in some form or another
but love is forgiveness
it is patience

and if it lacks those two qualities then it is simply a fleeting moment

I see a great deal of emotion in your words

well done

[revalatia]

Thanks for that review. .. You are correct, love and patience indeed. To an extent. its when you realize you're the only passanger on that bus that you feel retarded in knowing that journey was only across the street.. lol at least in my case .. cheers

[Nisreen]

Makes me think of a wise man that did things that everyone viewed as insane
Only when he revealed his reasons and plan everyone was shocked

I learnt to look with my mind and never my heart
to evaluate anything

it keeps one from haste i guess
sorry for writing so much

[revalatia]

Not at all.. speak freely... thats advice i should really try using- that mind over heart technique.. might actually yield better results at the least. Thank you very much!

[Anindita Janhabee]

wow.. such a beautiful piece... true love... nice dedication... when you love someone truly then you wish the best for him or her.. but fact is that sometimes we don't deserve them...
keep writing.. very good...
Anindita : )

[revalatia]

thanks... same to you...keep up the good writes btw :)

[alifeacoustic]

Beautiful and heartfelt. I hope the silly person let's you know he knows you shouldn't go. Great ending. I sometimes wonder myself why we procrastinate so much over every thought, instead of having the bravery to listen to our hearts.