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A Poem by revalatia

I've begun to see your plight

My solace lifts you up in flight

and you know this isn't right,
you wake up crying through the night. 
For your love, you know I'd  fight
i'll be the one that holds you tight
you're my sunshine i'm your knight
please don't ever leave my sight"....
but as darkness brought the light

making everything seem bright

Their love had turned to smite

prolonging fate's eternal bite.

© 2016 revalatia


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A beautifully captured, emotive piece, showing how no matter what the people involved want or think, fate does play a cruel hand. Love the lines For your love, you know I'd fight i'll be the one that holds you tight you're my sunshine i'm your knight. That is all anyone can hope for.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A beautifully captured, emotive piece, showing how no matter what the people involved want or think, fate does play a cruel hand. Love the lines For your love, you know I'd fight i'll be the one that holds you tight you're my sunshine i'm your knight. That is all anyone can hope for.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 24, 2016
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revalatia
revalatia

Azusa, CA



About
Thoughts in motion..words spiraling inside me.. more to come.................................later....In the meantime.. My own moment of clarity.. was realizing repeating the same mistakes over and ov.. more..

Writing
Beeware.. Beeware..

A Poem by revalatia