dunno what it means

Sometimes I cant get you off of my mind,

It doesn't make sense, and it cant be defined.

Although a distance does keep me confined

I imagine sometimes that our stars could align.

A time when more than our dreams are entwined.

I know it cant be, but all sense has resigned.

Blushing at thoughts of our bodies combined,

imagine your arms wrap around from behind.

trembling at thoughts of us, I'm inclined

Wanting you more with each dream of this kind~

Reviews

[Lost, n'MT]

This is brilliantly written, while also capturing pain and sadness. In these two lines in particular;.
"I know it cant be, but all sense has resigned.

"Wanting you more with each dream of this kind"~" Those two lines really capture the pain that really hits home. Though, it also expresses the blissful perspective of the dream. I suppose it's perspective, but either way, beautifully expressed.

This was excellent. While I love how you executed the rhymes, the heart of this piece is what leaves me remembering the most. Rhymes are my favorite, and this is one of the best I have read and felt together.

I was wondering though, had you considered any other titles? I don't feel it sums up the piece. A fantastic piece nonetheless, thank you.

[revalatia]

nice review dude..very much appreciated.--- I have considered other ones... but I feel sometimes I write things down so quick just to release it from myself.. that many times I end up adjusting things to make more sense.. titles included.. haven't gotten there yet though :P ha...thanks again.

[Lost, n'MT]

I can definitely understand and relate. You are welcome.

[Anindita Janhabee]

rhymes at the best... everything ends with -ed.. just have a look for - be aligned ..if you can make it...
I really liked this one... very nice flow maintained.. keep it up!!!
Anindita :)

[Norman 223]

Nicely designed, . The mystery of infatuation, whether real or imagined can be overwhelming. Is it real, is it attainable. Dreams can make it real,if only for a short while.

[alifeacoustic]

Beautifully soulful words etched upon your mind and delivered perfectly in this wonderful piece. When our thoughts and dreams are consumed by the thought of that one that you can't be with, you look forward to every slumber laden adventure.
Love this.