Angel of Darkness

A little something from my youth

The scorching flames upon my back, 
hands are bleeding, dry and cracked. 
The burning glow of satan's face, 
takes me to a darker place, 
where demons live and devils grow, 
A place where i have died to know. 
The scorching flames turn into wings, 
I pledge my soul to fallen kings.. 
My bleeding hands ignite your fear, 
my only duty is to bring you here. 
The years in life you made me lose, 
is why i've come to conquer you. 
I'll die and rot inside your mind, 
your mortal fate will be declined. 
I'm here to bring you down with me, 
eye for an eye in death for thee. 
To burn and swell in immortal hell 
consuming time within fate's cell 
because all you've done and all you've said

is the reason WE are truely dead. 

Reviews

[KeeD]

Besides a spelling mistake and some grammar this piece is great, It's the genre of poems I love to read the most. I look forward to reading more of your stuff this was great. I've been working on a series of Dark Poems related to a 15year old Girl who has been possessed. I'm almost done with part 4 and 5 if you'd like to check it out maybe we could work on a series together about something horrifically deviant in the future. :) Great Write, a true fan.

[revalatia]

Heck yeah.. i'll totally check that out.. collaboration would be a fun little project me thinks ;)

[Lost, n'MT]

Powerful piece... filled with so much emotion... I loved it.

Again small grammatical error, but if you were interested; you wrote "truley" instead of "truly". fantastic piece!

[??????]

I must say your rhyme is quite awesome and held all the way to the end. I understood the poem quite well I have seen many things from dear friends. I think we all experienced the demons inside and were taken to a darker place. It is quite scary I know I seen it myself. Overall I was very pleased with your poem:)

[alifeacoustic]

Very POEtic, if you don't mind me saying so :)
This has a very even beat to it, like with the Vincent price voiceover I told you about in another review comment, wouldn't be out of place hearing this with his voice, like he done so superbly throughout his acting career, but none more so than the thriller video. Maybe you should try spoken word :)
Excellent write, very dark and oozing darkness.

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

This piece is very interesting, I love the flow you gave it, the rhyming rhythm worked almost perfectly. Creative job forming a voice within this write, you truly penned something dark and captivating all the same. Excellent write.

[Shadows Ember]

This is phenomenal. I love the theme and flow and the formatting is appropriate and flows well. I say its pretty spectacular.

[Stan]

Vivid and dark. Good job

[junaid altaf]

the approach needs to be given a thought....
but the concept is an appreciated one!!!!!!!!!!!

[J. Castor Streit]

I'm still a huge fan of gothic and dark imagining. This was great - straightforward, raw, and unforgiving. Very good work. Other people mentioned the spelling (apon should be upon; soul duty should be sole duty, etc), but otherwise this is a great piece.

[revalatia]

thank you!.. yeah everyone says that.. i meant.. "my soul's duty.." but whatevers.. too lazy to edit lol.. peace.

[Steven]

like the heart here.

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

Grammar and spelling aside, this poem flows brilliantly and the rhyming is clever. The imagery is also intense and raw. Very good!