~smoking with Krystle~

in memory... and smiles

I walked through the park when I noticed this chick 

who was sitting alone with a joint and a bick.. 

"My name is Krystle. You wanna get high..? 

..I got killer weed, that you just gotta try!" 

So I sat, and we smoked and we joked as we toked. 

and as we got high, the hours flew by~ 
  
I said, "d*mn this is strong, man I hope I don't die!!"   

We just sat in the park till the sky got too dark. 

She said, "I'm glad that I met you, but I do gotta bounce... 

..Lets meet up tomarrow, Hell! .. I gotta whole ounce!" 

I said, "My name is Amanda. Just so you know." 

 She said "Dude, you told me that 3 minutes ago." 

.....And so thats how Krystel and I had first met.. 

In the park after sunset... I will never forget. 


                      RIP KRYSTLE PISTOL.. I MISS YOU!

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Ah, what a lovely day that must have been. There is nothing better than a surprise stone, one you weren't expecting and to make a new friend to boot...Awesome biscuits.
Sorry about your loss though, but a beautiful remembrance of what must have been a beautiful person.

[Andie]

It was very cute and it had its funny parts to it. Awesome work.
I am very sorry about your friend by the way.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A poignant memorial to drug culture that killed a friend.

[revalatia]

Skin cancer was the culprit.. but yeah..

[KeeD]

Did Krystle ever get a chance to read this? I'm sure she would love it. Its just sweet and has these honest moments of humor added to it. Really nice piece, I'm sorry about your friend, shes in your heart now and will always be.

[revalatia]

Thank you for your review of my poem.. I really wish Krystle had gotten to read this as well..

[Sacha Davison]

I give you my sincerest condolences for your friend.
I suggest you give it a quick read-through to correct some of the typos, but otherwise this is a great piece.

[fireblossom]

I am full of love and admiration for these words.

[Pax]

what a sad end....
a friend in unexpected places...
a friend that will always be remembered...
sorry for your lost.
nicely penned!