~smoking with Krystle~

in memory... and smiles

I walked through the park when I noticed this chick 

who was sitting alone with a joint and a bick.. 

"My name is Krystle. You wanna get high..? 

..I got killer weed, that you just gotta try!" 

So I sat, and we smoked and we joked as we toked. 

and as we got high, the hours flew by~ 
  
I said, "d*mn this is strong, man I hope I don't die!!"   

We just sat in the park till the sky got too dark. 

She said, "I'm glad that I met you, but I do gotta bounce... 

..Lets meet up tomarrow, Hell! .. I gotta whole ounce!" 

I said, "My name is Amanda. Just so you know." 

 She said "Dude, you told me that 3 minutes ago." 

.....And so thats how Krystel and I had first met.. 

In the park after sunset... I will never forget. 


                      RIP KRYSTLE PISTOL.. I MISS YOU!

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Ah, what a lovely day that must have been. There is nothing better than a surprise stone, one you weren't expecting and to make a new friend to boot...Awesome biscuits.
Sorry about your loss though, but a beautiful remembrance of what must have been a beautiful person.

[Lost, n'MT]

A joyful experience captured in a very nicely written with clever rhyming and flow. My thoughts and condolences go out to your loss. The memory and this poem are both wonderful, and I hope it was helpful to write this and re-live this experience. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed this very much.

Edit: Minuscule grammatical erorr, but you had written "bick" instead of "bic". Not sure if you noticed or it even matters, but I thought I'd share. Good piece!

[MoriartyMesa]

Well, thc can express a freedom of truth and pals become loved ones. And you find yourself a better person for it. Let all past friends rest in peace.

Cheers an pass the lighter.

[Tate Morgan]

That was precious.Amazing how we make friends in the oddest of places and times. Sharing is the key to enlightenment

[revalatia]

thanks ;)

[Stan]

Very nice. Been there, done that.

[Holly Mason]

nice read flows easily thanks much for the write

[Tracey C.]

Very Nice, I Enjoyed This Very Much

*Sorry to hear about your loss* (lost 2 friends in 3 years)

[revalatia]

thank you for your comment and nice words.. :) much appreciated!

[Tracey C.]

anytime :)

[N!LoC]

oh my... true story eh!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

a wonderful tribute

[JC]

would make a great comic as well..RIP