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just stuff written in "the moment"

Run with me now, my dearest friend, 

the direction we're heading leads right to the end. 

At least we're together and will always be. 

Your love is worth risking calamity. 

From the moment we met, 

it was destined my friend.. 

that the moments we share would devoid us of care. 

Now that you're here, one last kiss for you dear~ 

and then we shall part. 

The warmth of your lips took my life from the start.

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Ah, those friends that are worth risking calamity are few and far between. A great flow to this and beautifully worded.

[stars are far]

That was well done :)
Good job

[revalatia]

thanks! :D

[Moon]

Good write, it is very gripping and it makes the reader feel

[Eileenws]

I love the poem and the title is very catchy. Maybe a comma between you and dear. Rhyming is hard. You do a good job.

[Max Watt]

I love this. It's got me thinking a lot, the title is making me wonder whether it's more than it seems on the page. Either way there's real emotion embedded here. The flow changes halfway in, I'm not sure if this is intentional or not, but maybe due to the peaceful and fulfilling tone it would be appropriate to keep it consistent, with each line the same length and so on. Just a thought. Keep it up :)

[revalatia]

thanks for that review.. you kept it real and dropped some good advice.. rock on :)

[KeeD]

"Your love is worth risking calamity" i really loved that line :)
This made me feel good to be human, to be alive, to have feelings and to have a mind. This was great :) I'm adding it to my favorites by you < 3

[revalatia]

nice! thanks man

[Sacha Davison]

This is very powerful for such a short poem. The flow was very nice as well as the rhyme scheme.

[Pax]

intriguing... i feel like there is something going to happen between the two..
maybe a post apocalyptic scene...
great!

[revalatia]

yeah.. thats the what I feel when I look it over also.. visually i see like two shadows male/female upon a hill about to experience some grey destruction of some sort. i dunno.. i dreamt it lol

[Pax]

lol... but its great... its something like the movie 2012...