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A Poem by resurgent_amen
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To See
To see without looking
without a distrust of
this human being
that which i am

To not know of something deep
without the truth of that which i have become
and have subdued in the shallow 

To see not with these eyes
not with these hands
nor these paper cutouts
of humans that i'm expected to join

To see through this
and hold nothing within
but push out all that is
to whom it may concern

to whom it may awake

to not distrust
this human being
that which i am
to love

my brother
my sister
i know

i know 

and i 

love

© 2009 resurgent_amen


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I like how the writing slowly gets less as the poem is read. I suppose I think that the narrator is getting weaker or less confident in their self.

"and have subdued in the shallow" That's my favorite line, because, well, I'm not even quite sure. LOL. Something about it just really gets me.

Good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I like how the writing slowly gets less as the poem is read. I suppose I think that the narrator is getting weaker or less confident in their self.

"and have subdued in the shallow" That's my favorite line, because, well, I'm not even quite sure. LOL. Something about it just really gets me.

Good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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