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A Poem by resurgent_amen
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To See
To see without looking
without a distrust of
this human being
that which i am
To not know of something deep
without the truth of that which i have become
and have subdued in the shallow
To see not with these eyes
not with these hands
nor these paper cutouts
of humans that i'm expected to join
To see through this
and hold nothing within
but push out all that is
to whom it may concern
to whom it may awake
to not distrust
this human being
that which i am
to love
my brother
my sister
i know
i know
and i
love
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© 2009 resurgent_amen
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I like how the writing slowly gets less as the poem is read. I suppose I think that the narrator is getting weaker or less confident in their self.
"and have subdued in the shallow" That's my favorite line, because, well, I'm not even quite sure. LOL. Something about it just really gets me.
Good job.
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I like how the writing slowly gets less as the poem is read. I suppose I think that the narrator is getting weaker or less confident in their self.
"and have subdued in the shallow" That's my favorite line, because, well, I'm not even quite sure. LOL. Something about it just really gets me.
Good job.
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 17, 2009
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