Deep within

Experimenting :)

From within,

To another,

Bound one by one to eachother.

Comes with the warmth that you deserve,

Leaves you hollow with a phantom feeling,

Feeling good for what you got, but deep within you want to stop.

Back upright as you strile,

Walking fast mile by mile,

Looking for someone for you to bind, your deep within is far behind.

Driven by all you don't have,

Greed seems to have the upper hand,

Maybe one enlightening day, there might be space for your better half.

Author's Note

I am very new at poems and simply trying out my stuff, feel free to leave constructive feedback on my poem or tell me if you liked it. Thanks!

Reviews

[KlineXcreed]

I think it's really cool! Keep up the good work!

[Brynn White]

I like it! Poems are difficult, yet they are so easy when they come from the heart. Jeez, I'm being cheesy. Really, keep it up!