Wild Flowers

I love Arkansas. It is soo pretty in the spring!

 

Beautiful wild flowers.

Wonderful to see.

Laying in the field of them.

Wondering if they admire me?

They are so lovley.

I will not pick them.

I will let them be.

My pretty llittle wild flowers.

They are wonderful to me!

 

Author's Note

There are a ton of wild flower in Arkansas! They are so pretty!

Reviews

[Aimee Mahathy]

This is an adorable little poem! the line "Wondering if they admire me?" struck me deepest. Such an innocent thought, yet creative. It made me smile!
Great job!

[Dalaina Renee]

That is cute. I love the admiring me part. It reminds me of Alice and Wonderland, where Alice is listing to the flowers sing to her. Wonderful poem!

[Greystone]

My suggestion: The line reads 'Wondering if they admiring me?' I would suggest that you either ditch the question mark or change the tense of 'wonder', but that's just me. ^_^ Adorably innocent poem, love. Keep up the good work!

[foolsrush]

I enjoy the happiness in this work of yours. If I may suggest a subtle change:

"Wondering if they admire me ..."

rather than the "?"

[PaiteAuthor]

Very pretty. I really like the rhyme in this poem. Well done.

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i enjoyed the rythem and the beat; that the poem gave

[Rose Kavanagh]

Very cheerful, innocent and uplifting. Good job!

[Victoria Harlequin]

Nice, makes me feel happy!

[Alias Fletcher]

I like that one too. thanks for the uplift. rii