Rhythm

For Eric <3

Always wanting, always wondering

A secret whispered across your lips

Uncover a new depth of soul

Your love is a steady rhythm

It's always the little things

Captivated by lack of sleeves

Drumbeat soars through the heavens

Your love is a steady rhythm

Illness shows the crazy, the ugly

Prison doors keep me away

Fear of loss pierces my heart

Your love is a steady rhythm

Fights burn orange and red

Flames seek to destroy

Healing comes with forgiveness

Your love is a steady rhythm

Lonely in the wake of lost footsteps

Missing you is hard to bear

Emptiness of an ocean

But your love is a steady rhythm

Moving slowly towards forever

Step by tiny little step

Sometimes forwards, never back

Your love is a steady rhythm

A fresh start brings new vocabulary

Infused with laughs and love

Confidence means for real

Our love is a steady rhythm.

Our love is a steady rhythm.

Reviews

[J Johnson III]

Really good. Believe it could give all relationships hope. Also, I think this would make a pretty awesome song.

[JC]

I like the vibe of this piece, it is...rhythmic! it is like an ode chanted trance like...great job.