Elvis

Elvis

A Poem by Renata

Outwardly
he lives within a shrine
Inwardly
in the jailhouse (rock) of his mind;

Elvis roaring on the record
Elvis plastered on the door
blue suede slippers
(shoes were too expensive)
placed neatly on the floor

Elvis on the bedsheets
Elvis on the lamp
sunglasses
(more like Elton’s)
worn so coolly 
yet crazily camp

Elvis on the bath mat
Elvis on the towel
Elvis in the twitch of his hips
and grimace of his scowl

Elvis has left the building
and Elvis sits here in a chair
a light glowing faintly
behind those eyes
but mostly no longer there.

© 2025 Renata


Author's Note

Renata
For my Uncle, Elvis Jacquot.

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Very sad when this happens, I went through it with both parents.
I like your allusion to Elvis Presley---I grew up with him...my godparents bought me every single of his in the fifties...he was my favorite...and his decline was so sad....much like those loved ones we watch deteriorate in front of our eyes.
This poem is so powerful.
j.

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Renata
Renata

Bordeaux , France



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