CHAPTER 1:one wierd dream

Wake up!Jeane!wake up! That is when Jeane realized that she has fell asleep for almost half the hour.Without uttering a word the bell rung signalling the end of class."what is wrong with you this past few days?"
"nothing"said Jeane
"does'nt look like nothing to me. try to get some rest"
"fine.I'll see you later Eric."Jeane arrived home wondering where her mother is"mom? are you here?....mom...?????"
"she is gone Jeane"A strange man appeared with wide yes and a staff in his hand.
"what?who are you?"Jeane said in a terrified voice.The man answered with jerkish laugh when suddenly....."Jeane???"
"mom??"Jeane responded and rushly ran upstairs.
"Wake up!" a rough voice said. Jeane realized that she was with the strange man in his dream and is no longer in her house.There were strange creatures,plants were of no plant she has ever seen .Everything seemed so dark and there was almost no light.
"who the hell are you and where is my mother and why are appearing in my dreams?"Jeane said in an angry voice. The man with a dispersed look in his face stood up and walked away.When Jeane was about to follow the man she realized that there was a mark on her palm.
"What are you doing here mortal?"a voice appeared from the cave and a handsome young man appeared and grabbed her by her wrist."I said what are you doing .....what's that in your palm?"
"sir?"
"gobble,why does she have this mark?". Gobble looked at the Jeane with amazement."sir,that mark can only be by someone who is the born as a pure vampire"
"that's impossible.are you telling me that this mortal is the one?!..hmm..gobble,take her to the castle"
"as you wish sir"
"hey,don't!!"Jeane tries to resist but could'nt."where are you taking me you..you..wahtever you are.."
"welcome to the vamptopia"said gobble
"vamp what???"
"You may sit down as you for hishighness to arrrive and discuss your matters"

Author's Note

I am atechnical writer and really have no idea how to write a story.please comment on how I can improve