Color me

You color me incompetent

i think you are a fool

its is not my actions that have ruined us

not my words that have been our end

don't blame me for my opinons

for my feelings, for my shame

 

You color me emotionless

i think you are too

you have not lived a full life

you don't know pain

you can't tell me what it feels like to be broken

or even understand simple emotions

 

You color me wrong

you demean my nature

you call me insecure

you say i'm idotic

and you hate the way i act

 

i color you wrong

wrong in your thoughts

wrong in your words

and wrong...wrong for me

Author's Note

don't test me

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Sometimes we just have to cut our losses and move on. Thanks for your kind review glad you enjoy my rhynming poems lol.

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"don't test me"
Hmmm....
=]
I like this one a lot. I like the idea of "color me" and the repetition of that phrase throughout the piece.
How you end it with "wrong for me" is powerful; it packs a punch, and I like that. =]]]
I like punching.
Very good work my dear.