Wouldn't It Be Crazy

Wouldn't it be crazy if we fell in love?
It would be like some fairy dream story

It would be like the heavens opened up above
Dragons roamed, unicorns meetings, Ravens writings, piggies flyings, 
Jaded eyes finally weeping

Wouldn't it be crazy if we fell in love? 
I could be that Bonnie to your Clyde
Shake that martini, sequined dress, double beds, wing back shoes
When you zip up my dress

Let's just stay here, dear! On this balcony! 
TrueRomance here Dear! 
Life's distractions are free -

And --

Wouldn't it be crazy
World gone mad crazy! 
So much fun crazy....
If we....

Copy write Lisa Dryer

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This might be the most original love poem I've read in months. I'm not sure all the imagery ties together in a cohesive flow, but you've selected some mind-blowing & unexpected ways to visualize falling in love. So refreshing compared to the typical flowing romantic banter one usually finds. I especially love the line with piggies flying. Also fun is the walk back into vintage Bonnie & Clyde trappings. I like the playful approach to love & life described here.

[reluctantsyren]

Thank you so so much! I know I still need to work on it, but it was actually this little ditty that a year ago brought myself and my boyfriend together. We used to live in two seperate states and only be online buddies. I hope to keep working on this and make it a song he can use as he is a composer and performer. You've touched my heart! Thank you for your constructive criticism!

[barleygirl]

Very cool to hear about your love story, too! Thanks for sharing (((HUGS)))