Mary

think before to do

Mary  was a girl who has unmarried. One day a woman came gave her hand to marry for husband.Her husband name was Ali.Mary 30 years old . Her age had gone to marry because her family and she willing to marry so they agreed.Ali's wife was sick and she not able to bedfellow.So doctor said to him neither you can't lie with her nor she bring forth.So Ali was going to second marriage.There is allowed second marriage for men.He were  three  children.   Yet he wanted to marriage.Mrs Ali was arranging to everything for husband marry.She didn't want it but she was forced to it.Likely she wanted to heart of husband.And she hearten herself.She fetched to her husband his wife.She couldn't stand it but she could nothing.At night time her medical report fetched and told them she has recovered and she has deserved  of husband.She also happy and sad .Ali had informed but he had marred.In the morning his first wife came and said to him now i have recovered so you should come beside me for one night and one night beside Mary .You have to do that because i have fetched bride now you should do justice.Ali first wife didn't want to go beside Mary but she was feeling it but she kept silence. Then started their usually days some time they kept quarreling some time thing were better.Like this many months spent. Then Mary brought forth a baby.One day when her daughter about one year old was quarreled in between of them.Ali first wife so excited in it.She was speaking rudely that your father was a corrupt man your mother and your all family is not good.So she couldn't stand she took a rod and stroke her head and go away from home to her brothers house.But she had forgotten his daughter when she sent brother for carrying then they refused from it.Mary was crying so much.At last she demand of divorce .When Ali first wife heard she was very happy.So she tried to again and again at last she succeed .It had not happened before in their family.But Mary beg for her daughter.Now she meet her daughter tow time in a year at religious feast.On Eid day.             

Author's Note

where is mistake tell me please

Reviews

[samparks,sam]

Mary was a girl who has unmarried. One day a woman came to give her hand to marry for a husband.Her husband's name was Ali. Mary 30 years old. Her age had gone to marry because her family and she willing to marry so they agreed.Ali's wife was sick and she not able to bedfellow.The doctor said to him, neither you can't lie with her, nor she brings forth.So Ali was going to second marriage.There is allowed second marriage for men.He were three children. Yet he wanted to marriage.Mrs Ali was arranging to everything for husband marry.She didn't want it but she was forced to it.Likely she wanted to heart of husband.And she hearten herself.She fetched to her husband his wife.She couldn't stand it but she could nothing.At night time her medical report fetched and told them she has recovered and she has deserved of husband.She also happy and sad .Ali had informed but he had marred.In the morning his first wife came and said to him now i have recovered so you should come beside me for one night and one night beside Mary .You have to do that because i have fetched bride now you should do justice.Ali first wife didn't want to go beside Mary but she was feeling it but she kept silence. Then started their usual days some time they kept quarreling sometime thing were better.Like this many months spent. Then Mary brought forth a baby.One day when her daughter about one year old was quarreled in between of them.Ali first wife so excited in it.She was speaking rudely that your father was a corrupt man your mother and your all family is not good.So she couldn't stand she took a rod and stroke her head and go away from home to her brothers house.But she had forgotten his daughter when she sent brother for carrying then they refused from it.Mary was crying so much.At last she demand of divorce .When Ali first wife heard she was very happy.So she tried to again and again at last she succeed .It had not happened before in their family.But Mary beg for her daughter.Now she meet her daughter tow time in a year at religious feast.On Eid day.

nice I make some correction

[samparks,sam]

The story is nice be continue every time

[Avanthika]

the story is emotional , however there are quite a lot mistakes in the story. read as much as possible , watch , write , read , speak english and you will improve your writing.

[Marie]

My dear, there are so many mistakes in grammar here, that I could not possibly point them all out. But I know English is our second language. As you write more, you will improve. This is an interesting story. You must practice your writing.

[GA]

My English is so weak i want improve it but how will it.I like it very muuh