A Date With Rain

Its all about loving the rain :)

You appear by making your presence felt everywhere..

     the leaves shimmer,the dust start to swirl.

The train of people rush to their station..

    I rush out of home to meet you and thank your creation.

 

The falling of your drops..

      on my face adorned with a sea of emotions..

 sweep me off my feet..

     and i drench myself in your shower of blessings.

 

I struggle to look at you with my eyes wide opened..

  each time you hit me hard.

My eyes shy away to wink..

  yet you keep playing your sweet prank.

 

I jump around the puddles you create..

  splashing water with fun.

You play with my tresses..

 soaking them as far as you can.

 

You bring your friends,lightning and thunder..

  who play hide and seek and make me shudder.

You too move with the wind here and there..

  I keep hopping with as much care.

 

Time invites you to go back..

  I ask you,when will you come back.

When you go away,I still feel you..

 just the way you  beautify my world at a go.

 

The souvenir of my date with you is the droplet that glitters..

The token of my love for you is the greenery of prosperity all around..

The memento of our fun is the mud stain on my dress..

The reminder of our meeting again is the moment we surround..

The witness to my waiting for your arrival is the endless sky..

Can't you be with me always,why the time has to fly? why it has to fly?

 

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Reminds me so much of my childhood days. It sure has the innocence of child because these days, only children seem able to appreciate the little joys that the rain can bring. Wonderful poem. The flow is fluid and the words childlike. Great Poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[*Evelen*]

I love how you described your time with the rain. Very creative. =)

[Chris]

Wow....that's really wow...all i can really say is wow. You nailed the whole fun with rain thing. Your descriptions are amazing. Once again i say wow.