Pondering....

this poem is for anyone who has many questions on what they shuld do wit der lives and then jus decide to stop well i tell you now dont stop....

 

Lookin left

Lookin right

Lookin up

Lookin down

But each way I look I frown

Nothin in my life goes right

Things with great opportunity just seem out of sight

Like a star in the great stary night

You reach out, but you can't reach it

Then you say to yourself "this is bullshit"

I know I've been there numerous times in my life

Goin around with nothin, but pain and strife

I wish things would change course and make it easy

So it would be easier to please me

But all I'm doin is squintin my eyes, tryin to see

What lies beyond the sea

The sea we call life and its wonders

And I sit here as the one that ponders

For newer things and newer opportunities

But to me it doesn't seem like there's anything for me

I wanna feel the love I see with two couples

So I can sit with my lover and just cuddle

Maybe even put my new jacket on the ground so they can walk over a puddle

I wish for a lot of things, but thats what I feel I need right now

So, I can just stop askin how.....

How can I improve my life to how I want it?

I need to stop askin and actually do

And look for things that are new

I keep my head in the clouds

Only that gets me lost in the crowds

I don't speak, I don't think

I keep breakin off things that could lead to the right link

The link of new opportunity

I know you've all felt like that....well a good majority

You all felt as if you want more

But then get to that dead end and feel dumb because you don't know what you were looking for

But yet you sit in that spot days on end

Sittin there with a frown like you lost your best friend

When you hear a voice tellin you to move and search

And look for somethin new

Somethin new for you

I'm still lookin and I do get lost

But sometimes you have to pay the cost

But then you look on the bridge of opportunity and ask........should I cross............

........And that voice will tell you....................yes............

 

Reviews

[DuCeZ]

wow hun..datz beautiful.. I am speachless
you really did your thang on diz one.. I cant even start to explain the feelings i felt when i started to read it.
It's just pure beauty..and so many pepole can relate to that feeling lost and not being able to find what you wanna see or find..its juss a bomb azz write all da waii!
Great job boo
Luv u